User:Spirallingflowers/Article Critique

Article review
The Adventures of Mary-Kate & Ashley was a 1990's children's detective television series following twin sisters, Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen. Although the mysteries they solved usually turned out to be something easily explained, the delivery and twists throughout the show kept you on your toes. As a child, their light-hearted, comical, and musical form of investigating kept me intrigued. I visited The Adventures of Mary-Kate & Ashley page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: some of the plot outlines give away the solution to the mystery, none of the songs are listed, and the lack of citations.

Plot outlines
As a user of Wikipedia, I quite often browse the page of a movie or television show I would like to watch to get the gist of the outline. Upon review of The Adventures of Mary-Kate & Ashley page, I realized many of the plot outlines actually gave away how the mystery was solved. The plot outlines are quiet short as it is, so I think it would be worth expanding the description of each episode and taking out any information at would spoil the ending for any potential viewers.

Songs
This collection is a musical mystery series and each episode has between two and six unique songs, I believe it would be worth mentioning those songs within each of the plot outlines. For instance, in the episode "The Case of Thorn Mansion", songs include: theme song, "Give Us a Mystery", "B-U-T-T Out", "Bravery", "That Funky Musicology", and "The Ghost Song (No Such Thing)". Since there are eleven total episodes, that would give the page a little more depth and fullness.

Summary
The page could definitely use some help to bring it up to par. The lead, format, and plot outline sections could all be redone to give a better summary of the show and the episodes, including taking out the spoilers. This would also allow for the titles of the songs to be added and citations put into the body paragraphs of the page. Overall, this page has most of the basic information someone might want but I think it could be done in a better way.