User:Sploosh95/Spiritfarer/Shrkym Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

sploosh95


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sploosh95/Spiritfarer


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Spiritfarer

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the addition of a character list is good! As someone who has not played this game, I think an additional section on gameplay could be a substantial addition as well. For example, you reference spirit flowers often in the character descriptions, so additional information on what those are and how they are used within the game could be helpful (further examples of what a gameplay section could entail here and here).

Another possible addition could be a section on the development of the game; you could include behind the scenes information from art design, to programming, to the writing. I'm actually kind of interested in this game after reading the Wikipedia page, so I did a quick Google search and found this interview with the creative director that could be helpful!

The tone remains neutral in all additions and editing, and everything seems accurate and up to date. I am unsure about the use of other wikis as sources, however, as they themselves can also be edited by anyone but with way less peer vetting than Wikipedia. If possible, I'd try to find better sources just to be on the safe side.