User:Spod010/Bacchus and Ariadne/DFox03 Peer Review

So far, I think your sandbox ideas are really good. This is an extremely interesting but also historical painting that already has a ton of information. For a singular painting this makes your job difficult. I think you have great ideas so in terms of critique, I pretty much agree with you. A detail from class you could include is how Titian almost painted in a way to separate himself from Bellini, so maybe you could discuss how he does that with this painting. I feel like the best course of action is to look into the commission of the painting as you are and then if that leads to a dead end maybe you could discuss how it shares certain features with his other paintings and how come this is considered his masterpiece. In terms of everything else, sources look good, tone is good, and content is good, but this article can be great with some more background and additional details.

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