User:Spokane1999/TikTok/Awymer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Spokane1999


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Spokane1999/TikTok


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * TikTok

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article? Yes, I believe your information has overall improved the quality of the article. I think the addition of your information is useful and specific. However, I wonder if there are areas in the current wikipedia page that may need removed or possibly revised to be more clear and concise. The original page seems to have a lot of information thrown at you all at once.

What are the strengths of the content added? Your explanation of viral trend and the role Tik Tok plays I think is important. It really draws a clear picture of the significant role an app such as Tik Tok plays in our society today.

How can the content added be improved? I think you could expand on examples and application of the use of Tik Tok in today's society. While I think the specific United States section is important, I think it can be greatly expanded upon. There was major concern when Tik Tok fist came on the scene. Has that concern decreased, increased, stayed the same?