User:Sponge37/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Third Party Non-violent Intervention

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Relevant to my PE org. First impressions: very short and in need of updating and elaboration. Has a lot of room for potential improvement.

Evaluate the article
On of the links cited, when clicked, leads to a page that is no longer there. The lead section gives a quick few sentences of what Third Party Non-violent Intervention is, but lacks in detailing the four main areas it outlines, being 1. Interpositioning, Observation and Documentation, Protective Accompaniment, and 4. Modeling nonviolent behavior in a conflict situation. It lists but does not evaluate on what these are. The article does appear to be neutral and include relevant information and resources, however there is a noticeable lack of contemporary sources from the last ten years, and in my opinion it could use a wider variety of sources to elaborate on the topic. Currently it only has five, one of which is a link leading to an invalid page. Has no spelling errors and displays concise language.