User:SpookyIsland/Necrophage/Blueram1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SpookyIsland


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SpookyIsland/Necrophage?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template#cite_note-:12-15

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Necrophage

Peer Review By;
Blueram1

Lead
I like what you have done to the original Lead and adding a much needed citation for the root of the word necrophage.

Content
A lot of very good content in your addition to the article. This topic is so interesting and was badly in need of more information on the wiki page. I felt that this addition to the article is somewhat heavy on the forensic side of necrophage as it is a very broad topic. The section you've added on the Role of forensic entomology was very well written and enough on the topic.

Tone and balance
Excellent tone and balance! but like I said above less mention of the forensics.

Sources and references
Really well sources with many good articles and research sources. Some of the citations in the references cited have the dates written differently giving warning messages from wiki. Just making all of the citations are consistent.

Organization
A good read and very informative. I like the way you broke it down into taxonomic groups.

Images and media
The current article only contains one picture of a fungus, I would like to see some images of the different mentioned taxa eating some carcass.

Overall impressions
excellent job bringing life to this article and not letting it be consumed! I think you've done a great job and have added a lot of good information on the topic!