User:Spookysmoothie/Ecological design/Basilgreenmint1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Spookysmoothie and Compostherich


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Spookysmoothie/Ecological_design?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ecological design

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks as though their lead it pretty organized and reads easy which was one of their goals from their checklist. I can see how their topic relates to social justice issues but it doesn't look like they have done much with incorporating that yet. Everything looks neutral but I feel there could be a couple more sources or linking of information back to one of their existing sources as there appears to be a lot of information that doesn't have a cite next to it. The organization appears to be good and I liked the image that was in there because it allows the viewer at first glance to take a guess at what ecological design might mean.