User:Spookysmoothie/Ecological design/Louistheyounger Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Spookysmoothie)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Spookysmoothie/Ecological_design?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ecological design

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I thought that the changes you made to third paragraph of the overview was very good frankly. Your changes modernize the article and the language of the article quite a bit. I don't know how dear John Button is to the eco design community, but he didn't seem necessary with his one sentence.

- nice change - mimicry to biomimicry and a link

- The additions of Ecological design issues and the role of designers and Life Cycle Analysis seem to be very relevant to the topic and modernize the article.

- Some additional sourcing on the new material would benefit it, though the changes themselves are great.

- I didn't notice spelling or grammatical errors, new content is well written and concise.

- Bold additions - very relevant and improve upon the existing article - Keep up the good work!

your friendly reviewer,

Louistheyounger