User:Spookysmoothie/Ecological design/LuckyDatLlama Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CompostTheRich, Spookysmoothie (Ecological Design)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Spookysmoothie/Ecological_design?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Feedback on LEAD

- When reading your lead, I really enjoyed the information that was introduced that focused on all aspects of eco design, regarding its creation and the status of it today within many environmental movements and architecture. Your lead is very concise and not overwhelmed by too much information. After reading your lead, it reminded me of a course that I took in which it taught me about different sustainability efforts within design. It is always important to focus design around its surrounding environmental in order to promote a natural interaction with nature. Design should always enhance its surrounding environment. Taking a look at work done by architect Rick Roy, you can utilize natural earth materials to create elaborate and engaging structures that focus around promoting the environment within. I would focus around sourcing a bit, as most phrases were copied and pasted directly from an existing Wikipedia article ( I do see this is already being focused on, as it is stated in the "ideas" section of the page. The content within the overview is a great stepping stone for the rest of the page, as you can use it to build different topics within your page that discuss the different sections of eco design (green architecture, sustainable agriculture, etc..). I recommend including different uses of eco design within religious communities, as eco design ranges amongst global communities. The information is really clear to read, and enjoy that the topic is more orientated around a given term used within many fields of operation. You could easily elaborate on the incorporation of eco design within many environments such as homes, hotels and public spaces. I would possibly include an "examples section ( probably not name it that), here you can include many different examples of how eco design is included within Architecture.