User:Sportsphreak73/Evolution of Island Mammals/Athanasius22 Peer Review

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Sportsphreak73


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 * User:Sportsphreak73/Evolution of Island Mammals


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The article has a clear lead section that introduces the topic and its facets. The content of the article is relevant to the topic, but the History section could be improved by the inclusion of a study from a different set of islands if such a study exists. This would help to balance out the paper by equalizing the History and More Recent Evidence sections. However, it is organized appropriately for the topic discussed. The references could also be improved by the addition of in-text citations via the cite function. The references are from reliable and recent sources, and the aforementioned adjustment would make it easier to view those sources. Otherwise, the author stayed neutral, and the links work for the majority of their sources. Additional sources could also help to enrich the entire body of the article, if they are available.