User:Sportsphreak73/Evolution of Island Mammals/Joeadunlap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

sportsphreak73


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sportsphreak73/Evolution of Island Mammals
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe you intended your first section to be the lead section. It does not have to have a header but other than that I thought it introduced the article well. The overall structure and organization was good and made sense. I think words such as "obviously" infringe upon a tone of neutrality so it might be best to avoid such words. That sentence about scientists disagreeing near the end would be fine without that word. Other than some wikipedia related formatting issues, the overall article is good and is on the right track.