User:Sportsphreak73/Evolution of Island Mammals/Kira-g.w.w. Peer Review

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Sportsphreak73


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 * User:Sportsphreak73/Evolution of Island Mammals

Evaluate the drafted changes
Really awesome topic, these theories have always snagged my interest and I enjoy reading about them. Nice background and I appreciate all the examples and instances you gave. I inserted invisible comments next places I thought could use work but they're all, to mostly, suggestions. A few suggestions I have made are grammatical issues and word addition/omissions. I think in general a few more wiki links could be added just to give the common reader a little more information and an easier/faster reference for wordings/definitions that they may not be familiar with. I think there were some instances that needed a citation added by reasoning that you mentioned a particular study but then there was no cite to back it up. I also added a suggestion of adding another part to this article of the early evolution that has evolved into Foster's Rule. I also think adding a genetic component could really support this topic. I really like the layout you have organized this to and this topic is one of my favorites! Great work!