User:Spqr mc/Tris(silox)tantalum/Mikenuggets22 Peer Review

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Spqr mc
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Evaluate the drafted changes
This article includes basic properties and reactivity of the compound. It would be great to have a table of properties and chemical structure of the compound like most Wikipedia pages do. It would also be good to have some Wikipedia links in the content to let readers easier to link to other related pages. All the details in the article are referred to from liable academic papers but would be better if references were in the right place. The article is precise about what to include and it’s mostly neutral. Suggestion for each topic is listed below:

Coordination with π bonds:

When coordinating with CC or CO bonds, I believe it forms either two Ta-C bonds or one Ta-C and one Ta-O bond respectively, according to your visuals. Also, the place of reference 3 can be more precise instead of inside the bracket.

Special Coordination with Pyridine and Benzene in η2 Mode:

The reference for this reaction is better to include in the paragraph instead of the figure caption. I am also curious about why this compound, particularly, coordinates with pyridine and benzene in the η2 mode but not sandwich structures.

Reverse Dative Interaction with BH3, a Strong Lewis Acid:

You mentioned this compound is very thermodynamically stable, which I think is not neutral. I would suggest only writing down how it is stable under different conditions but exclude that specific sentence.

Insertions:

I would say ‘upon heating’ is not a clear reacting condition. I would like to know under what temperature and how much time it takes to react. I would also like to see the reference of the compound reacting with hydrogen.

Carbon Monoxide Cleavage:

Similar to the above, the reference for this reaction is better to include in the paragraph instead of the figure caption.