User:Springfrog32/Sequoia National Park/Guerita1188 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Springfrog32 and Sassafrass15


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Springfrog32/Sequoia_National_Park?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sequoia National Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like there are only a few sentences so far of added content to the original article, if I am seeing the draft correctly. I also see some ideas of how you would like to expand the article to include the history of the relationship of indigenous people and the forest as well as the involvement of the Buffalo Soldiers. The small section that was included about Buffalo Soldiers does not include any citations, so make sure that you reference a source there. I also do not see any possible references on the page, maybe you have those listen somewhere else. I do not know much about the history of the park, but I am sure there was some conflict/displacement with the indigenous people that lived their originally that I would focus on. I think it is a great idea to include information about BIPOC in the park today, I am going to have to think about that when I am editing my own article as well.