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The original Sydney Writers' Festival Wikipedia page gives only a brief outline of the festival, containing no further details of the events held during the festival. The couple of sentences tell nothing more than what can be gleaned from the festival's website. If I were the article's first creator, I would have included a brief summary of the festival's events, notable guests, as well as the theme of the festival which the events revolve around, and the public's response/ reception to the festival. If I were the second reader, I would have given a breakdown of the festival's events and included the history as to why the festival was created in the first place/ its significance.

Week 6 Articles in need of updating:

Harbor Towers - removed the random links to 'corrosion', 'apartment buildings' and 'condominium' which appear later in the section although some of these terms have been aforementioned without links. Removal is part of a request to make the content sound less like an advertisement.