User:Sprousm/Malo (jellyfish)/Tds10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Sprousm/Malo (jellyfish))


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sprousm/Malo_%28jellyfish%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sprousm/Malo_%28jellyfish%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Introductory paragraph: This little paragraph at the beggining is awesome for introducing the organism to the readers. I feel like it should introduce the entire page to your readers, almost like an abstract in scientific papers. Just a suggestion. Great job!

Taxonomy: This part of the page looks great! see if you can classify it further and if not what you have is awesome.

Irukandji syndrome/treatment: The explanation of the syndrome is good and very to the point. I like how you also put a treatment spot into the paper just to let people know what can be done to treat it.

overall paper: I love what you have so far, but i think more needs to be said about the organism itself. For instance, what does the malo jellyfish eat, where does it live and what habitat does it prefer, how it mates, ect. While there is more to be said, the paper is overall a great start for this assignment! The paper is very organized for a start and it pulls the reader in when the syndrome is introduced. keep adding details and this paper will be an awesome read.