User:SpyroThePurpleDragon/The Satire of the Trades/Hvkmbr0818 Peer Review

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SpyroThePurpleDragon


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 * User:SpyroThePurpleDragon/The Satire of the Trades


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Satire of the Trades

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead evaluation

Great additional information and neutral wording. I think the word "quite" isn't necessary and you can stick to "this is unclear".

Sources evaluation

I think this section can be incorporated into the lead, and doesn't need to be its own section.

Description, The Satire's Use in Scribal Schools, and Interpretation are all excellently written.

You've done an amazing job at neutrally presenting information, and making a pretty small article much more substantial. Good job! My main critique is just to incorporate the Sources into the lead.