User:SpyroThePurpleDragon/The Satire of the Trades/NorthGoose Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SpyroThePurpleDragon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SpyroThePurpleDragon/The_Satire_of_the_Trades?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Satire of the Trades

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead has been updated with solid introductory sentence. Lead could use descriptors for article's main section. Lead is concise with the adequate amount of information. Content seems relevant and up to date. How established is it that this source is a satire? You discuss multiple perspectives considering whether or not this source was intended to be satire or propaganda, but refer to it as a satire in your own writing. Possible favoring the perspective that this source is of a satirical nature. I would consider possible changing your language about the source, unless it is commonly known as satire. Your sources seem thorough and current. Organization and media look great. Good job!