User:Sqe2023/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Cola

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It is a generic article that has been labeled as a level 5 article that needs improving

Lead Section
Lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes cola.

Lead does not include a brief description of the major sections of the article. The descriptions are disengaged.

Lead includes information about the inventor of cola that is not discussed in the rest of the article.

Lead might be overly detailed. it could be organized more clearly.

Content
Content is relevant to the topic

The content is up to date.

The full history of cola is missing along with more detailed regional information about cola.

The article addresses the presence of cola in all hemispheres but does not give descriptions of impact or history in these regions or on the contributions to cola by specific populations.

Tone and Balance
The article is neutral.

There are not claims that appear heavily biased.

The viewpoints of cola's impact/contributions from other people/countries besides its original inventor and the Soviet contribution of White Coke.

No minority or fringe viewpoints to be minimized.

Persuasion is not present.

Sources and Resources
Some sources that are cited are newspaper articles but most facts are backed up by a reliable secondary source of information.

All sources are thorough.

The sources range from 2019 to 2005.

The sources are written by a diverse spectrum of authors.

The majority of the sources cited are available. Some links are dead.

Organization and writing quality
The writing could be more concise and easier to maneuver.

The article has very little grammatical and spelling errors.The article needs better organization that reflects the breakdown of the topic. Right now it seems sporadic and unnatural.

Images and Media
There are four images that make the topic very clear and understandable.

All images are well captioned.

Images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations.

The images are placed in a spatially unappealing manner. Also there could be more images about the different brands of cola and the evolution of cola distribution.

Talk page discussion
All conversations revolve around fixing factual discrepancies and missing information.

It is rated a level 5 vital article, C class, and Top Importance. It is a part of WikiProject Food and Drink.

Overall Impressions
The article is disorganized and requires centralization around the topic.

The article has several interesting sources cited from all different regions and languages.The article needs a better lead, information on its invention and evolution as a product, more information on the regional variations and contributions to cola, more images.

The article in almost well-developed. It needs refining and filling out.