User:Squidgerine/Procambarus digueti/Hannah-Walton12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Squidgerine


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Squidgerine/Procambarus digueti


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Procambarus digueti

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello,

I think what you've got so far is a great lead. The paragraph about this species in your sandbox captured the essence and uniqueness of P. digueti. The first sentence is useful and concisely describes what you'll be talking about in the article. Each sentence in the lead paragraph hints at what the future sections will be about, and I was genuinely captivated and wanted to learn more about this species. Although, I would like to know exactly the section titles you will be talking about. In regard to neutrality, you sound unbiased and knowledgable. I believe the sources are sound and legitimate, as well. However, the first source takes you to the USC shibboleth login, which requires a USC login in order to reach the library database and the article you reference. If you could obtain this article without requiring the USC login, I think it would help to make this article available to the public. In addition, if there are any more recent resources, I think those could be useful. If you could find something about reproduction or food preferences, that would be cool.

Once you add in the sections you want to add, this article is going to be really interesting and useful. Can't wait to read the finished product!

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