User:Squidneybean/Bob the Drag Queen/Greenhorse0828 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Squidneybean

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User:Squidneybean/Bob the Drag Queen


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I am peer reviewing Squidneybeans article “Bob the Drag queen”. To start I think all of your references are reliable and work, however, be careful about the wiki fandom link since it is a fan website that people may not take seriously. I’m not too sure on everything that you added because it’s not super clear, but from what I can see I think everything you added was good information and unbiased. I also noticed in the original article that they refer to him as “he/him” the whole article while you switch. I saw he goes by both “he/him” and “she/her” so I’m sure that doesn’t matter that you switch but I’m not too sure so I just wanted to point it out. Maybe if you do switch make sure you use he or she in the same sentence and don’t change it in the same one because it could get confusing. Also one more question, did you need to delete the quotes of him talking about his mom in the second paragraph of his early life? I think you could still add what you added while keeping those quotes. Overall, I think you did a good job at adding new information and having reliable references. I enjoyed learning about Bob the Drag queen.