User:Squidneybean/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Bob the Drag Queen

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I have recently started watching RuPaul's Drag Race, and this is my favorite person on the show. When I first read the article I noticed that it was a bit short and some of the information was not necessary.

Evaluate the article
The beginning section was concise and summarizes Bob. I do think that the last sentence should be taken out because it lacks relevancy. The content appears to be good overall. I do believe that there should be more in the article about Bob's time on RuPaul's Drag Race. The person the article is about is part of the LGBTQ, is African American, and is a drag queen. So, equity gaps and underrepresentation do play a factor. The overall tone and balance of the article itself I would say is good. They make sure not to express a bias in any way. For sources and references, the only problem I found was that many of the links took you to the website's homepage and not the specific article they are referencing. In the article, there are only two images and they are from 2017. I believe that there are many other pictures that would be more beneficial to this article. The pictures are also captioned by just the date they were taken (only one has a location). The talk page only has a few things on it. The majority of the talk page is discussing Bob's pronouns. On the talk page, it is brought up that one of the sources doesn't clearly mention what Bob's pronouns are, even though it is used as a source. I believe that the article overall needs more information and should go more into detail on Bob's experience on Drag Race (what they are most known for).