User:Squinard/Black Lives Matter art/Achebbi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Squinard/Black Lives Matter art


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Squinard/Black_Lives_Matter_art?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Black Lives Matter art

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the biggest step towards enhancing this page would be to add more content to the leading section/ opening paragraph of the Wikipedia page. As of now, the singular sentence in the beginning, while true, does not provide an enhanced overarching view of what the page is and what content it will present. Including an overarching summary of what types of art have made and when art around BLM began to emerge would be helpful.

A big strength of the article is its organization. The page is organized well and divided into subsections centered around different types of art: murals, sculptures, etc. In adding information to the page, it may be beneficial to include more information or background on each of the pieces, as opposed to only stating what the piece is and where/ when it was made/ presented. Maintain this when making the final draft of the page.

The inclusion of pictures onto the page is really excellent and helpful in showcasing the information presented in the article. The article overall also contains a neutral tone that is maintained throughout the page. The references page is also well done and it is evident that research was done for the page.