User:Squinard/Black Lives Matter art/Cwall114 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Squinard


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Squinard/Black Lives Matter art


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I think the lead on this article could use some work. Maybe just mentioning and describing the other sections of the article would work. I don't think it has to be too drawn out. All of the content seems to be relevant to the topic and everything is up to date. I am not an expert on the field or anything but I think there is a lot more forms of Black Lives Matter Art out there so I think there's plenty of room to expand on this article. The tone of the article is also very neutral and there doesn't seem to be any bias towards any particular positions. All of your citation links work, and they come from a diverse group of sources. Overall, I think this article is well written, concise, and easy to read. I think expanding upon the lead section and just adding more information as you continue to research will make this page great.