User:Squinard/Black Lives Matter art/Janice.christell Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rscaggs02, Milanamalec, PrincetonSponge1, Squinard


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Squinard/Black_Lives_Matter_art?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I do not feel satisfied that I know the importance of the topic. An introduction regarding why art is important to the BLM movement would be nice.
 * You gave more weight to certain parts of the article over others. Try balancing this out by adding more about sculptures and Critical reception.
 * I am not sure what the structures of the sections are. A sensible order could be chronological or order of importance.
 * I am not sure how the bottom chart titled BLM relates to your overall page. Consider editing the chart or adding context as to why it is there.