User:Squinard/Black Lives Matter art/Jo.joh.371 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Squinard, PrincetonSponge1, Milanamalec, Rscaggs02


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Black Lives Matter art - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead has a sentence that concisely states what the article is about, but that's it. It's too concise, but the topic is very broad, so more can be offered there. The balance is very good and neutral, so there's not much that needs to be changed there. The content is relevant to the article. I'm not sure if it's up to date, because there might have been stuff made more recently. The sources seem fine; for this topic it seems pretty hard to find better sources because of how the art would be reported on anyway. The content is well-organized, and this article also has imagery that is visually appealing and relevant. Given that this is not a new article, the might need to be a couple more established sources, but that's not entirely the fault of the people in this class. The list of sources probably doesn't represent all available sources, but again this is a broad topic, and finding good sources this might be hard. I'm not sure if there was any content added because in the review history the stuff that was said to be added doesn't show up on the actual article.