User:Sraol21/Wilding Picture Productions/Zardo Zap Peer Review

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General info

 * Wilding Picture Productions (Colette Obermaier and Shreya Raol)
 * Wilding Picture Productions

Lead

 * Lead gets to the point - needs years of operation
 * expand on major sections that will be covered within the article.
 * Sandbox is empty
 * Content Gaps

Content

 * Content Gap
 * Needs update on history and citations
 * Maybe since Chicago /studio is so important, moving it to its own section?

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * lot of BIAS
 * "Gag reel of bloopers and flubs collected from various Wilding shoots. Contains both racist stereotypes and risqué moments."
 * The whole "Notes" section should not be in the article -- "The plot involves"

Sources and References

 * 1937–1966: Chicago Essanay Studio period - seems to be the only real "salvageable" information

Organization

 * needs

Overall impressions

 * Im just going off of the existing article since the sandbox is empty im not sure where to find your changes