User:Sray13/Social influence/Clancyelizabeth Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sray13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sray13/Social_influence?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social influence

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits you've made are helpful to the article. I think your first sentence in the "Minority influence" section is a good introduction sentence, which the paragraph needed. It also gives much needed context to the article, and comes from a reliable source. I think that historical context is something lacking in the article as a whole, which would be a good way to continue your edits. I also think that adding some media to the article could enhance the article. The article seems to be a bit choppy, and I think media could help it flow a little better. This could also be helped by moving all of the "see also" sentences to the "see also" section of the article, instead of underneath the section headings. Good work so far!