User:Sray13/Social influence/Marleywdunn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

sray13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sray13/Social_influence?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social influence

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your edits so far look good! One suggestion I would make is adding some detail from the Moscovici paper you reference to give some context on the beginnings of writings on minority influence. It would help readers understand why that paper was mentioned and what earlier writings on the topic said. I also think there looks like some opportunities to add citations to some claims in the article and that could be a good place to add edits. The article has very little under each heading in the "Types" section so that would be where I would expand on if I was writing. Also, the global approach section is confusing to me and could be a good place to add clarification on the point of that section. Great work so far!