User:Sray13/Social influence/Nikkigb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sray13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sray13/Social_influence?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social influence

Lead

 * There's no lead, so I would add a note that you're currently working on it.

Content

 * There is one source from 2010 so I think adding a more recent source will add more weight to the content you added.
 * I think you did a great job with choosing obedience to add onto, It is one of the underrepresented topics in the article.

Tone and Balance

 * The content added is completely neutral.

Sources and References

 * I was not able to access the sources without paying for them however one of them had many authors. One of the sources however only had one author so I would suggest finding more peer-reviewed sources.

Organization

 * There are a few spelling errors for example reputable is misspelled. Effect is written in the beginning when it should be affect.
 * It would also help to break down into sections so it's more clear what you adding content to.

Overall Impressions
You added some important content to the article, I like how you added background to one of the topics. I would say working on building a lead that summarizes what the article's topic is. I think It would be really beneficial to add some sources with multiple articles as well.