User:Srehman07/Hijra (South Asia)/Avillalobostovar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Srehman07


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Srehman07/Hijra_(South_Asia)&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hijra (South Asia)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the information you provided was thorough and easy to follow. I like how an explanation of how hijra are often viewed, when in reality it is something different than how they are typically viewed by society. I also think that the explanation as to how they are seen and treated in society (like how they are treated in the medical field) is extremely important. It gives readers knowledge and understanding that they are not treated with equality and respect because they cannot receive the medical attention they need. For this section, maybe you can add any actions or incentives that are being taken so that hijras are not treated unfairly (if there are any).

Organization and general flow of information was easy to follow, resources also provide readers with more knowledge with more detailed explanations if needed. Only verify the spelling in some sections, I noticed some of the "their" being spelled wrong. Other than that, I learned a lot from your article and I enjoyed reading it. Good job!

- Alicia.