User:Srivera6/Behavior informatics/Psychcap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Srivera6


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Srivera6/Behavior_informatics?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead is well written and does include a leading sentence that expresses the meaning of BI well. The lead gives just enough detail that explains the rest of the information covered in the article. I did not notice any information in the lead that was not covered in the article. Reading the content throughout the article all seemed relevant to the topic. The article is very neutral in tone. The organization looks very well so far. I was unable to find any spelling errors. The citations are good and they back up the content well. There are some minor changes which have already been addressed like using the abbreviation for BI or using the full name. Sticking with one is best. Besides what is in the sandbox there really isn't much to the article. I hope to see it flushed out more. Much more was added to the lead so I can anticipate that Sofia will add much more to the body of the article. A lot more sources should be added to the final article. All in the sandbox looks well. Maybe more subtopics could be discussed including a marginalized topic not usually covered.