User:Srmcg/Dura-Europos synagogue/Ysbin0121 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Srmcg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Srmcg/Dura-Europos_synagogue?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template (Wall painting & Iconography)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
In general, more resources are needed in order to increase richness and credibility. Also, the use of the words "most likely originated" from the Iconography section needs to be either paraphrased or added more resources since it could imply a lack of credibility. Also, using imagery would enhance the understanding of the content readers. However, other than that tone is neutral and good. Bringing more resources would definitely help this Wikipedia page to stand out.