User:Srthompson012/Roloway monkey/Ossp001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Srthompson012


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Srthompson012/Roloway_monkey?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Roloway monkey

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! It looks like you made a few small changes and additions for your article which look pretty good overall! I noticed that you added imperial measurements for the monkeys' weight which could definitely help Americans better understand the size of the monkeys. I also saw that you added to the monkey's habitat description! I really like the point you made about their "habitat" also technically being in captivity. My main advice to you for those last three sentences would be to read them out loud and make some changes to your syntax and wording because they're a bit difficult to understand. It also looks like your sources are accurate and based on the tidbit you wrote about there being a study on the monkeys, it looks like you took some information from a journal; fantastic. Keep up the good work. :)