User:Sschriber/Ana María Cetto/Ethorsen Peer Review

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Sschriber
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ana María Cetto - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ana María Cetto - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like how you added dates, and it looks like you fixed some misinformation. If possible, I think it would be nice to talk a little more about her personal life as well in that section. Also, there are a few places I think it might be nice to have a wiki link. In the Museum of Light section (explain what that is) and maybe in the Scientific Dissemination section (info on what the Mexican Journal of Physics talks about). Also, the sentence about her work as a professor/director (in intro) is a little confusing. Overall, I think you added some great comments, good job!