User:Sschriber/Ana María Cetto/Seburr Peer Review

General info
seburr
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sschriber/Ana María Cetto
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ana María Cetto

Lead

 * The lead has good information for someone visiting the page and reflects what the rest of the article will talk about. I think some of the sentences could be re-written to flow a little more easily (either make multiple sentences or structure in a wy that requires less commas). The guiding questions for this peer review suggest that there is a breif descriptions of each major section, and maybe there could be one sentence for the early life section.

Content

 * maybe put this sentence: "She is the daughter of the renowned German-Mexican architect Max Cetto." at the begining of early life. Also, idk but does that need a citation?
 * maybe give a brief explaination of what "Ana María Cetto Chair for the Diffusion of Scientific Culture" means in the international work section
 * I like that you have added the section explaining some of her work, but in the paragraph that you have, you say "this article" but done reference one of the specific articles?

Tone and Balance

 * overall good neutral tone throughout the article

Sources and References

 * from the links that I tested (a good amount of them) they all worked
 * everywhere except for that one place that may ned a citation (mentioned above) seems to have a citation

Organization

 * I think the way the article is organized makes sense. maybe put the books above the selected works? just so that if the explaination of those works get longer, her books dont get lost at the very end of the article.