User:Sshack2/Gender script/Feminista del Caribe 22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * SShack2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Gender script
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft is great! I understood the concept well and the points made on the subject really complement each other and add to value to the topic. I'm not sure if I understood it right but be sure to check if you can directly cite in Wikipedia. The first paragraph is really strong but perhaps you can shorten or eliminate quotes so the writer's voice (in an objective tone of course) could be more present in the text. Good work!