User:Sshockley1/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Volkswagen Advertising

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I love Volkswagen advertising from the 60's and thought this would be an interesting topic to learn more about while I'm learning about Wikipedia.

Evaluate the article

 * The article contains relevant information about the work produced for early VW ads, but the title implies that it will cover more than just that. It references the late 50's-60's but should be expanded to include more of the company's evolution as there is already another article that covers the campaigns in this article.
 * There is no lead and the article has little substance.
 * There are no images.
 * The article is written neutrally and references factual information.
 * Some sections go a while before referencing, but this is likely due to the whole section referring to one source.
 * Most sources appear to be clear except for two that are not complete, but when you click on links they are no longer active and need to be updated.
 * There are some entries on the Talk page, but no one seems interested in acting on improving this article.