User:Sshockley1/Flourless chocolate cake/UWCLStudentSpring2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sshockley1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sshockley1/Flourless_chocolate_cake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Flourless chocolate cake

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the additions you've made to the lead. It was expanded to reflect more of the contents in the article. I also appreciated the citing you entered in it. I didn't expand the lead in my article, which is something I will have to go back and edit on mine.

Overall I thought your additions were well thought out, researched and adequately cited.

One suggestion I have is to cite the addition about the toppings in the gluten-free section. It would be nice to reference where those sources were from.

Also, I didn't notice anything in your bibliography. I'm not sure if this is supposed to be included in this assignment. If it is, you may want to add your sources in there.

Nice job!