User:Ssimmons05/Anawana Haloba/Dihstortion Peer Review

General info
Ssimmons05
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft:Anawana Haloba
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The draft is very unorganized, information seems thrown around.

- There are no labels to her upbringing, art/exhibitions, early life, who she is.

- No references were used

- Information is a little too short and straight forward with no real description of who she is as an artist and her art style