User:St3ffsK/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: House of CB
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead section
 * Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence that is concise and clear
 * There aren't brief descriptions of the article's major sections (not much structure)
 * Lead is concise and provides essential information
 * Content
 * Yes, article's content is relevant to topic
 * Last edited was 4/6/2024, not up-to-date
 * Missing citations, missing information on market positioning, customer demographics
 * Touch on environmental concerns through the brand's sustainability efforts
 * Tone and balance
 * Neutral tone and doesn't show any heavy bias
 * Viewpoints seem balanced, article does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position
 * Sources and References
 * The article is backed up by the House of CB official website and newsletters, magazines
 * Sources are quite recent, however, none from this year
 * Sources are written by fashion companies, magazines catered to fashion trends, all have similar authors
 * All links work
 * Organization and Writing quality
 * The article is well-written and easy to read
 * No grammatical or spelling errors
 * There is only 1 section: the history
 * Images and media
 * Article includes 1 image, other images can be seen through citations
 * The 1 image is well-captioned, adheres to copyright regulations, and laid out in a visually appealing way
 * Talk page discussion
 * No discussions in the Talk page
 * Overall impressions
 * Still more aspects of fashion retailer needs to be included, citations need to be added, more news have been created since the last edit
 * The lead section and history is already quite strong and complete
 * Sources
 * "Meet the multimillionaire owner of House of CB", "Meet the British designer Beyonce loves", . "How House of CB Went From Unknown to Red Carpet Domination"
 * "Meet the multimillionaire owner of House of CB", "Meet the British designer Beyonce loves", . "How House of CB Went From Unknown to Red Carpet Domination"

Option 2

 * Article title: Electric Love
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead section
 * Concise and brief description of topic, straight-forward information
 * Content
 * Content is relevant to the topic
 * Not up-to-date, last edited 10/31/2023
 * Missing content- 2024 stage, motto, artist line-up, update on stage descriptions
 * None of Wikipedia's equity gaps
 * Tone and Balance
 * Neutral, none heavily-biased
 * Does not persuade the reader in favor of one position
 * Sources and References
 * Yes, it is backed-up with a reliable secondary source of information
 * Sources are thorough, not much current 2024 articles (maybe because it hasn't happened yet - July4-6)
 * Majority of articles are written in German (can be Google Translated to English)
 * Links work (only 1 doesn't work)
 * Organization and writing quality
 * Article is well-written- clear and easy to read
 * No grammatical/spelling errors
 * Well-organized into sections
 * Images and media
 * Images give a good illustration of what each stage looks like
 * Captions are brief and clear - not much description
 * Images are laid out organized
 * Talk page discussion
 * Confusion on title since "Electric Love" overlaps with a song title
 * Add the word "music festival" after "Electric Love?" --> decided to put "song" after the "Electric Love" song instead of changing it for the festival
 * It's developed, but more details could e added especially recent updates from 2024
 * Overall impressions
 * Overall it's almost complete but there are some missing details
 * More description of the history by years, all the different stages, can input statistics
 * Sources: Electric Love Festival 2024 Line Up

Option 3

 * Article title: Chawanmushi
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead section
 * Yes, there is an introductory sentence in the lead and it concisely and clearly describes the topic
 * There is no brief description on the major section
 * Content
 * Last edited 1/16/2024
 * Article's content is relevant to the topic
 * Missing content- it could be more thorough and shared more detail on the history
 * Tone and Balance
 * Neutral, no claims that are heavily biased, viewpoints are presented, no attempt to persuade
 * Sources and References
 * Yes facts are backed up by a recipe book
 * There is only one outside source, others are citations that transfer back to the Wikipedia page of it (1 reference)
 * All links work
 * Organization and Writing Quality
 * Article is well-written and easy to read
 * No grammatical or spelling errors
 * Doesn't have major sections to break down
 * Images and Media
 * 1 picture, and other pictures are included in the external links
 * Pictures in external links are captioned well and appealing
 * Talk page discussion
 * No discussions in the talk page
 * Overall impressions
 * Necessary details are already included
 * All citations to distinct Japanese ingredients used
 * Could be improved by having major sections
 * Sources: Japanese cuisine, Custard,

Option 4

 * Article title: GU (retailer)
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead section
 * The lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the topic
 * There are no brief descriptions on the major sections, only 1 about the history
 * The lead is concise
 * Content
 * Content is relevant to topic
 * Last edited 1/23/2024
 * More recent updates, statistics on sales, new designs/features must be included
 * Missing- additional citations
 * Doesn't address topics related to underrepresented populations/topics
 * Tone and balance
 * Article is neutral, no heavily biased claims, viewpoints are presented and accurately described
 * No attempts to persuade the reader in favor of one position
 * Sources and References
 * Facts are backed up by official website, fashion newsletter magazines
 * All sources are thorough, quite current but none from 2024
 * Sources are all written by newspapers
 * All sources work and are beneficial
 * Organization and writing quality
 * Article is well-written and easy to read
 * No grammatical or spelling errors
 * Well-organized, only 1 section
 * Images and media
 * Only 1 picture, other pictures can be seen in external link (official link of GU)
 * Talk page discussion
 * No discussions in the talk page
 * Overall impressions
 * It is complete, history is mentioned, could mention more
 * Can be improved through more recent updates on GU's sales and fashion market trends
 * The important details to what to know about GU is already included, but more history and images could be implemented
 * Sources: GU Company Introduction, About GU, "UNIQLO'S FASTER-FASHION BRAND, GU, FINALLY DEBUTS OVERSEAS