User:St3ffsK/House of CB/Ryleeg Peer Review

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St3ffsK on House of CB
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:St3ffsK/House of CB
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):House of CB

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1. Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * - I really enjoyed your added section on the brand's evolution. It was relevant and the stats were a great addition. Everything was relevant and went well with the previous writing.
 * 2. Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * - Everything feels neutral and unbiased, and your content represented the specific topic well.
 * 4. Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * - The last citation at the end of your first paragraph (labeled [2]) may be linking incorrectly or is different from another labeled [2] earlier in the paragraph. Great job adding citations throughout your section!
 * 5. Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * - References seem reliable. Since this is a more mainstream media brand/topic as of recently, it is expected that many related sites will be speaking on it and information may be circulated that is unreliable.
 * 6. Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?
 * - Seems up to date.
 * Overall, I think you did a great job highlighting the "brand evolution" of House of CB. I think the next step is to make sure all citations are in the correct place and accurate. It is very well-written and the statistics add another great element. I think this article may also benefit from photos, such as celebrities wearing the clothing. Or if any notable figure is promoting the brand, that could be added.