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Article Evaluation:

While reading and evaluating the article on collision avoidance systems, I found that the information was very technical and accurate based on my knowledge of the automotive field. although the information was very accurate there are details that could be added to give a better understanding of the components that make these systems work such as what exactly is yaw rate, and what are the sensors compiled of to make everything work together in harmony. Among other things, the reprogramming and extensive costs to repair would have contributed to the article immensely to give a comprehensive view on the inner workings of the system. The tone of the article was dry which is nothing short of what it should be, as its a technical read. The information presented was very good, and accurate with a general overview of what the system incorporates. Overall it was a write up but there are somethings that could be added.