User:Starfruit101/Coral bleaching/Fensk110 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Starfruit101


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Starfruit101/Coral_bleaching?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Coral bleaching

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that you have a very well thought out and organized list of stuff to add, everything on the list seems pretty relevant and important. Looking at the article originally kind of made me worried that there was not much room for expansion, but you clearly have some good areas to research.

I think the drafted paragraph you have is good, and could have links to other wiki articles added in the final version.

I think that spending some time on the impacts of coral bleaching on the entire ecosystem (something you have on your list) is a great idea. Maybe you could draw a diagram showing the cause and effects of coral bleaching.