User:Stariaz/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Digital media in education

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Not only does this article pertain to our class, it is also one I have an interest in. It also seems like it has a lot of work to be done on it, but the groundwork is there. It's written like an essay and needs to be re-written to be more objective.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The article is written in a persuasive style, almost like a class essay. In-text citations are lacking-- the references are there, but not utilized enough throughout the article itself. The sections are poorly divided and read more like paragraph topics than actual breakdowns of the topic (need to focus more on basics like history / examples / controversies). Sources could be expanded and updated as well. Needs to be fleshed out more. Development of the topic throughout history needs to be expanded on as well. Finally, article just needs a thorough re-write to fix wording and point of view to make it more neutral and objective.