User:StarmanDeMarte/Thomas L. McKenney/GrantDReid Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(StarmanDeMarte)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:StarmanDeMarte/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your article is off to a good start and your sources seem to be good in my opinion and the links work well. I think the article could really benefit if you added why Thomas L. McKenney displeased Jackson, assuming that information exists. Other than that I found the article didn't seem to written in a biased tone and you seemed to only give the facts which is good for this assignment.