User:Starmiffy/Zhang Hanying/Faith.m7 Peer Review

General info Starmiffy, Flying dill, Acbruin2024, SKUCLA
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Lead
The lead was very well-written but, it failed to explain the purpose of this wiki page. Who was this person? How are they historically relevant? These are the questions I had while reading the intro. But, it was a very good intro just maybe mention if Hanying was a feminist or what her position was in Chinese feminism.

Content
The content is written very well and concise! I found it easy to read and follow but, it may be helpful to hyperlink certain things like "Women's Suffrage Alliance." I really liked how the content was chronological but, at times it could be confusing as to how certain things played a part in Hanying's involvement in Chinese feminism. The Women's Suffrage Alliance section was the most detailed section which made it helpful to understand this person and their activities within the feminist/suffrage movement in China.

Tone and Balance:

The content could be a bit biased with the wording. Some words have a biased connotation throughout the article but overall, it is a very good draft!

Sources and References:

The reference list provided a variety of notable sources that seem to provide different topics regarding Hanying which I appreciated. Also, this group made an effort to properly cite their work throughout the article which made it easy to follow.

Organization:

The organization was a little confusing for me personally. If some information from the Women's Suffrage Alliance was introduced in the intro section, it would be easier for readers to immediately know who this person was and what they did. Why are they important? In addition to this, I think that the early childhood section can be used to connect Hanying's education to how they navigated feminism in a world where it was not allowed or was seen as taboo.

There were no grammatical or spelling errors that I noticed.

Images and Media:

No images or media was used but, I think it could be nice to have a picture of her for the article if possible.