User:Starmiffy/Zhang Hanying/Paintedsakura Peer Review

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Overall good information about Zhang Hanying. The sources all seem reliable and are secondary, cited throughly in the article. The sections are clear and easy to navigate. However, the lead section seems to be missing. In the “early life section, there is two mentions of heavy influence from her dad that is in close proximity, which makes it feel a little repetitive. Last paragraph of the women’s suffrage alliance section where a ton of names are listed feels a little chunky.