User:Starryberry/Sheila Ortiz Taylor/Bluemoon41 Peer Review

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Starryberry, GustavoCalva, NightWolf64, Orangetulip12
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 * User:Starryberry/Sheila Ortiz Taylor
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Evaluate the drafted changes
First of all, this article looks great! I loved leaning about Sheila Ortiz Taylor and each of your sections are organized and easy to read. Here are a few notes:

- The leading section does a great job introducing your topic and is concise and thorough. My only note would be that there are a few novels mentioned in this section (Spring Forward/Fall Back and Coachella) that aren’t discussed much in the article itself. I would suggest either removing them from the lead section all together or adding more information about these novels in the “Other Written Works” section.

- For clarity, I suggest using consistent formatting when writing the names of novels throughout the entire article. For example, always italicizing the names of Ortiz Taylor’s novels followed by the date of publication in parenthesis. This applies to the entire “Other Written Works” section as well as when Faultline (1982) is mentioned in the “LGBTQ+ Identity” section and the “Chicana Identity” section, as well as OutRageous (2006) in the “Chicana Identity” section.

- In order to increase visibility and reach on Wikipedia, I suggest that you include “wikilinks” to connect your article to others.

The information included in the article is backed up by your sources which are scholarly, reliable, and cited correctly. The article is also written in a neutral tone without bias. Overall, you did an amazing job, and I can’t wait to see the finished product!