User:Starryoung/Tobacco mosaic virus/Approximately90 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? I am reviewing Starryoung and VioletteMoonlight's writing


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Starryoung/Tobacco mosaic virus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists): Tobacco mosaic virus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists): Tobacco mosaic virus

Evaluate the drafted changes
The initial draft is pretty good. The links appear to work, and all new content appears to be attributed to a source. Source 3 is a little dated (1999) so there may be updated information on the structure of the virus recognizing viral DNA (second paragraph under Structure subheading), but this is not a big concern. You could consider going into more detail if your sources allow it.

In the material added under the "Genome" subheading, the wording is a little unclear here: "The noncoding region at the 5' end can be varied in different individual virions, but there hasn't been any variation found between virions in the noncoding region at the 3' end."

The information added under the "Treatment and Management" section is good, but it needs to be presented more cohesively. You mention that "A research was conducted and revealed that humans have antibodies against Tobacco Mosaic Virus" but don't go into any detail about this. This would be a great place to expand on your statement.

Overall a good draft! All sources appear good (the link for your 6th source in the sandbox draft of the article does not work for me) and the content added is good as well. The main thing I would work on going forward is going into more depth on the information added and trying to phrase your sentences as clearly as possible to match the tone of the rest of the article. Again, a few of your sources are dated so there may possibly be new information that is relevant but this really shouldn't be a big issue. You could also consider adding some figures to either illustrate your content or preexisting content.